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Review:Inti says:
I haven't read anything of yours for like a BILLION years, so when I saw you'd written a Bill/Fleur, just couldn't resist! And it is completely, completely lovely - just gorgeous.

Fleur is written fantastically well. She's more a Clemence!Fleur than the Veela!Fleur of canon, if that makes any sense? It really grounds her as a character, makes her much more human and approachable.

Bill is... Bill. He's great! Just so easy-going and effortlessly cool. I'm guessing they don't recognise each other for a reason. Maybe he cut his hair, time, all sorts of things. Pretty sure he would remember her anyway :P

Gabrielle is hilaro! She's like this little kid running around playing grown-ups. Imagine being Fleur having to deal with a sister like that!

Really, I just love this. It's so cute and light and fluffy and pretty and I just want to squish it. Realise you've only just updated, but more please and thank you? xD

Author's Response: Aw, well then I'm really glad that you read this and liked it. I'd been toying with the idea of this story for awhile and I finally decided to post it.

I'm really glad that you like her. And, yeah, that makes total sense because I always associate Fleur with Clemence. I thought that in the fourth book she was really haughty and I didn't want to write a character like that, but she does sort of evolve in the seventh book.

I haven't really gotten to him yet, but I'm excited. I'm glad that you like him so far. Yeah, a couple of people have asked me about why they don't recognize each other. Well, Fleur doesn't recognize him, but Bill does recognize her, as he'll mention in future chapters. I haven't forgotten that part of the fourth book where Fleur is eyeing him.

I really loved writing her! It's funny you should say that because I took inspiration for Gabrielle from my younger sister. Gabrielle going through Fleur's closet and nudging her when she sees a good-looking guy is so my sister.

I'm really happy that you love this because I love writing it. I will try to update as soon as possible! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :)

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