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Review:Rose_Weasley123 says:
I've read this story about six times straight through, but I've never left a review. For that I'm sorry, because this is one of my favourite one shots ever. I'm afraid I have to disagree with your Author's note here :P.

You have such an ethereal, haunting writing style which works so well in this story. There's something about this story which shows off the best aspects of your style and talent for writing. Plus, some of your imagery is just spectacular. I could probably quote most of the story in trying to find the most gorgeous part of it.

I love the transition between the sections too - there's a subtle shift in the writing which I couldn't explain, but it's there and it works so well. I loved how Rose blossomed in the second section, surpassing Victoire, the 'ideal' woman, and becoming the woman Teddy loves most. It's what I love in Ted/Rose stories, and you made it work so, so well.

I loved the play on both of their names; Victoire and victory and Rose and the famous Shakespeare quote. I loved the running theme of victory and names. Gah, I just love all of it.

My favourite thing was the theme of growing up. Both Teddy and Rose grow up and become perfect fits for each other, and somehow in 500 words you showed this transition, and adolescent love in such a succinct and gorgeous way. I don't know how you do it.

This story turned me into a rambling nonsense-person, so I'm very sorry if it made no sense. Basically, I loved it.

Becca xx

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