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Review:hallowsxhorcruxes says:
this sounds pretty good for the first chapter.
but a pet peeve i have is when people nickname characters who don't have a nickname..so, here's some constructive criticism if you will,
don't call hermione "mia" or "mione" or something like that..
other than that, awesome!

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for your review!

Ahh, I never thought of it that way. To be honest, the real reason why she has a nickname is purely cos its a drag having to type out her name all the time. lol.

However, I do actually agree with you here, and I will take your advice. I have already written ch.2 with the name "Mia" flying all around the place, so the chapters after that will contain less Mias as I will consciously make an effort not to do so!

Thanks for the review, hope you enjoy the next chapter!! xx

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