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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hi!
Ooooh I wonder what happened. :)
agian pace in this chapter if good there was one bit I thought you were going to lose it agian but you went back. That bit with the ten minutes later and then 20 minutes later it was really fast. So maybe add a bit more in.
Other than that everything is going goood. :P
Ginny45 xxx

Author's Response: yes i wonder what happened too lol
Again the whole "ten minutes later" and "twenty minutes later" thing is to save time and effort on my behalf
thanks for reading and reviewing
lots of love
melody


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