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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hi!
Okay! Since when do "strong looking hands and forearms" and "hip hugging belted trousers" have to do with preliminary ailment diagnosis?
That made me giggle. Best line of the chapter without a doubt. You night want to take some more time on each time period as it is very jumpy. Not so jumpy it is annoying but it is still distracting. I am going to read and review a few more chapters :)
Ginny45 xxx

Author's Response: hey Ginny45,
I'm so glad i made you giggle. The story is meant to be jumpy, mostly because i didn't want to sit down and write 30 chapters so i took out everything that wasn't really needed. thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
lots of love
Melody


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