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Review:lilylunapotter26 says:
Hi there! Mona was pretty well characterized. The readers know a little on what she's like. She seems like she's had a rough life. I think you might want to include her physical qualities as well as her traits. I also think you should give a little background on Mona. Why is she in the Institute? I know you said that her reason was pretty ordinary, but what is her reason for being in there?

The plot is very interesting. It's much different. Not in a bad way though. It's not something that people read every day, its unique. I think readers will enjoy it. I like it and I hope that you continue with the chapters. I hope my reviews helped. I'm new at reviewing so if you have any comments please tell me! Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :)

I know that we don't know much about Mona at this point, but it's just the prologue, in the next chapter we find out her reason for being there ;)

I just wanted a couple of opinions on the plot and all before I continued with writing this ^^

I'm glad that you liked it :D


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