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Review:Singularity says:
So, I kind of loved this. The description and detail really draws you in and the contrasting parallels of Luna and Nott's backstories was really interesting and beautifully done. I loved how you kept switching the POV back and forth and how they started out in their own separate 'worlds' with Luna wanting to remember and Nott wanting to forget, but ended up together, completing each other's thoughts. That was fantastic.

Also, I really appreciate that you showed another side to Luna. So often she is just the strange, free-spirited girl who is completely unaffected by everything. You portrayed her in a different, but extremely realistic way.

Author's Response: Woah, that's nice! I was reading up on the lexicon on people who could see Thestrals and saw that Luna and Theodore's backgrounds mirror each others curiously: both have old, widowed fathers and have witnessed their mother's deaths. For two characters who are supposed to be opposites (Luna a 'good', carefree, breezy girl, Theodore this minor Slytherin guy affiliated with Death Eaters) they were kind of the same. I'm also very much for showing Slytherins in a good light ;)

And I've always thought that Luna had another side. Having very few friends and being the subject of bullying for quite some time has got to have had some affect. I'm glad I got this across ;)

Thanks very much for the lovely review! :D

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