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Review:hermioneism says:
I am still loving this story, but IMHO I do think you would benefit by reading/editing/beta-ing your chapters over one more time before posting them. For instance, there is a copy-paste error in the start of the second section which states: "eir burgersfood before, and the others stopped to stare at him for a minute before shaking their heads and continuting to eat ."

Do keep writing, your characterizations are very well done. :)

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