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Review:Cynthia. says:
AMAZING story! I love the way their relationship is growing - slowly and deeply-; the stares, the internal codes they have, the fact that she keeps Harry and Ron very OUT of everything...!
I also loved Draco s insight about the whole changed situation after the war, and his smart intention to adapt himself to it.
It was fantastic when Draco embraced her (twice) and held her hand, I guess it was about time that he "felt the need to touch" her (this shows he no longer finds "muggleborn" Hermione repulsive) and (this is only a suggestion) I really hope this brings his chivalry/romantic side out (she is not a girl anymore, she is a young woman, a Lady!)
May be, before or after he opens up about his fears, family problems (Lucius is in Azkaban for Christ s sake!), blood prejudices, etc...; he could start asking personal questions to her too (eg.: parents, her muggle-raising childhood, habits, war consequences on her, etc.) and APOLOGIZING for all the name calling and nasty comments that made her live in hell for the last six years...

It is a pity they have only one month left to be together... and only "4 more chapters...(really?!?)". This story is too good to be cut there... and here is where I beg your fingers and your characters to push you further!!!

I wiil be eagerly waiting for your next... 10 chapters? LOL !!
Thank you very much for this wonderful fic!

Author's Response: LOL - thanks! I always enjoy reviews, especially such lengthy and detailed ones :) Yes, only 4ish more chapters to go for THIS story. I will do my best make them good and review worthy.

Don't worry, however, about the story ending when my fingers finish this particular journey. I may or may not have something else planned . . .;)

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