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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hello. :)
Your characterisation of Sirius again is really good.
Like here, "You never are,"
It is such a Sirius thing to do.
This "I'm not like you, James. You never worried about anything... you just went with your present feeling. I wish I could live like that. I wish I could just live in the present, but the more I thought about our relationship, the change in my feelings toward you, the more frightened I became."

Is the best bit of dialouge from this whole story so far. It describes the situation and explains what is holding Lily back in a short paragraph and I love it. It is so simple but it speaks volumes.
This chapter is so heartfelt as you can really feel what they are going through.
RandomRed/Ginny45 xxx

Author's Response: I know poor Lily and James, but it all ends up ok :)

Sirius is a fun character to write and I did a lot of thought into this characterization.


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