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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hi vertigo! :)
It start I didn't see any spelling or punctuation problems so if there was any they don't disrupt the reader.
Your characterisation of Lily is still on form.
Like here, and she narrowed her gaze at him as if suspecting he had used a spell to charm them.
I like how when you had James describe his night he mentioned Remus as I don't believe he would have forgotten about his friend.
I was gleefully smiling when they kissed :)
Awww no. James and Lily. A misunderstanding. Oh well I am going to continue reviewing you chapters :)

Author's Response: Very happy to hear you are enjoying the story and the characterization. Thanks again!

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