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Review:JLHufflepuff says:
This story has just made me your newest fan girl! I love every single part of it to absolute death! I love that you have his kids already there expecting him in what can only be their new house constructed on Malfoy property after they tore down Malfoy Manor? That's the only logical thing anyone would do to that house, really. It's also sweet because it's like Rose understood how lonely Scorpius felt at that moment in time and sent one of her kids out there to meet him. Aw.. :)

I think that his reaction to meeting them is extremely realistic, wit the exact right of Malfoy sass and the proper dash of childish disbelief. I think you balance his acceptance and disbelief of what happens really well - not too much of one or the other. My favorite part of his interactions with them was when he comes to the conclusion he has lowered himself to marry a Weasley.


Everything flowed completely naturally between all the characters. I love the way you've described Rose in the future, somewhat Hermione-ish yet not. The characters of Leo and Lyra are just perfect to me, also.

I'm wondering where the forty-one year-old Scorpius is at the moment, and prospect that they aren't supposed to tell him much about his future. It makes me absolutely die to know more. Hopefully Leo will let enough slip!

Randomly, I also like the idea of there being a Time Travel Committee! Very progressive, I think.

Anyway, this is a great story I shall definitely be wanting to read more of.

Author's Response: Aww thank you! Your reviews made me ridiculously happy, especially because I was only expecting one of them and instead I got three! You rock.

Yeah, it is a renovated Malfoy Manor (: And I'm hoping there'll be a lot of sweet moments between Rose and Scorpius without it turning into creepiness. My favorite part about writing this story is that it's not mainly romance. It's exciting :D

I really can't say thank you enough, but I'm going to keep saying it. Thank you! Your opinion really means a lot to me. Pretty much the best part of planning this story was coming up with the personalities of his children. It's quite fun, strangely enough.

So, yeah, thank you for your awesome reviews. You're really amazing and you've given me something to smile about all day.


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