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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
Oh my. Oh my oh my oh my. This is just...you know...utterly incredible, completely heart wrenching and wholly delicious. This is a beautiful one-shot. And it is Dom/Scorp! ;) This had certainly inspired me to make more of them later in Dominique, perhaps not in the first story, but definitely in the sequels that follow.

I really love how you write. Using the rain, the wind and the sea as comparatives and to describe Dom's emotions and actions, as well as Rose and Scorpius' embrace are poetic and stunningly portrayed. 'The icy droplets leave dark grey imprints on the sand. They kiss her exposed skin pitifully' was particularly bewitching.

It is a short one-shot, but I think you have summed up Dom's feelings and the whole situation perfectly. There is no embellishments or loquaciousness. It is simple. There is little dialogue, and the spoken lines you do use fit in effortlessly with the flow of the story, which I think is the most important element in a good piece of writing.

A truly beautiful one-shot. And your romance! And your first NextGen! Congrats!

Author's Response: *Takes a moment to let head inflate* - Joking! But honestly, you're far too lovely. Thank you so much!

Yes! Dom/Scorp all the way. It's my favourite next gen ship! (Closely followed by Dom/Lysander... which you introduced me too!) Please do spread the Dom/Scorp love, I'm very much obsessed with this ship but I don't see all that much of it around. My favourite ship combined with your writing is pretty much heaven for me haha! I look forward to it :)

Thank you very much for your kind words. I know this one-shot is bordering on overbearingly poeticy styley, and I was worried about posting it - so I'm really glad you like it.

Ack, I'm grinning like mad right now. My day has been made haha. Thank you for taking the time to review this, I really appreciate it. I'm feeling inspired to write more now. Once more, thank you so so much! It means a lot.

- H


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