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Review:writeyourheartout says:
Cute story! I think you incorporated the quote from the challenge into it really well! It was a surprise how you used it, too - I would have assumed a witty, humorous Marauder fic or something, so this was a nice twist. I thought it was sweet how you slipped in Angelina's admission. Also, I love yellow flowers, so you're officially awesome for that alone, haha.

You said that George has loved Angelina since the first moment he saw her - I think it would have been nice to have a little paragraph in there about why George chose to let Fred have her instead, or if he was even given the choice, if Fred even knew of George's feelings, if it caused any riff at all in their relationship, and/or how George felt seeing the two together - happy to see his best friend/brother and the girl he loves so happy together or simply hiding a bitter and heartbroken longing and aggravation? Of course, that's just small detail that I would have liked to read about, I think it would have enhanced my rooting for George to win over Angelina finally. It would have given me a much greater longing to see him get his happy ending. I didn't really feel that desire for the characters to be together, that absolute need for them to make it past the hurdle of Fred's death, you know?

But regardless of that detail, I still truly like the story! Very cute, fluffy one-shot! Glad I read it! Thanks for writing!

xTanya

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the long review. :) And you know, that makes sense. Maybe I'll work that in, edit this one-shot up a little bit. Thank you!

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