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Review:Ilasia says:
So, I found this whilst some people were madly squee-ing about a fourth chapter in the cbox and I thought I'd take a look.

I AM SO, SO GLAD I DID.

This is really just completely addicting, Mel! There's just enough ambiguity to have us all utterly perplexed as to who's behind it all, and you leave us with such suspense that we're holding our breathes for the next chapter. It's so well written too, I just absolutely love the segments with the different points of view as well as the insight into the actual murder being committed - totally brilliant, really!

Anywho, I think it's this Jones person. His name is being mentioned an awful lot, and that makes me suspicious. But hey, I'm the girl that watches a murder mystery movie and picks the most obscure people as the culprit. Sometimes I'm right though, really!

Ah, well. I suppose I'll just have to wait and see. :P

Lovely job,
Zinny

Author's Response: I find a lot of stories by cbox squeeing. :D I'm so glad that you found this too!!

When I began writing this last month, I was incredibly nervous about jumping from POV to POV... but it seems to have been received really well, and now I'm really glad that I stuck to it. Hmmm. Jones? That's an interesting theory. Well, you'll find out whodunnit in two chapters. :D

thanks so much for this wonderful review.
xx


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