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Review:Aiwe Saito says:
An interesting but well written story, but I still don't understand how, if they were in love, that would kill her. Perhaps I've simply never been poetically minded, but it would seem that it would have helped.

Unless, I suppose you were going for a Davy Jones, 'carve out him heart' sort of effect, in which case I need just a tad more clarity, I think.

All in all though, a solid one-shot. Nice work.

Luck&Love,
Ai

P.S I'm Aiwe Saito from the forums by the way, you requested ages ago and I'm only coming around to it. Sorry. ;/

Author's Response: haha. no worries about getting to this late. i tend to be a delayed reviewer sometimes as well...:/ i do understand what you are saying. i wasn't exactly clear on what i was trying to get at and although that's not always a bad thing, for this story perhaps it might have helped. thank you so much for the extremely helpful review. your thoughts are real and sensible and i am very grateful for this very nice review. i do appreciate your time very much! have a wonderful day! (:

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