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Review:helena7654 says:

Interesting story line. You could improve on spelling and grammer, but you're already aware of that so I'm sure you're trying.

Sometimes its a bit difficult to understand who is talking and saying which line, so maybe you could end it with "said Hermione, shouted Ron, cried Ginny" etc...? Obviously you don't have to for every sentence, but I'd think the first line from someone should be made more clear.

Anyway, other then that it's interesting, will keep a lookout for an update.

Author's Response: thanks xx :D xx
will update soon thank you xx

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