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Review:JLHufflepuff says:
Okay, this is so amazingly poignant that I almost started crying, seriously. First, there is the completely natural fatherly scene. I mean, I'm picturing James as my nephew and Albus as my niece, and I'm sure many similar situations like this have happened with them... It was so sweet and cute when, at last, James was able to get Albus to stop... All nice, sweet.

And then the addition of Harry's thoughts about death - about the sacrifice he made. Just utterly beautiful! It just goes to the deeper meaning of sacrifice in general. Sometimes you make the sacrifices to do something just because it's the right thing, and it might not seem like it at the time, but that's how you live the good life. Harry finally has the desires of his heart, though he'd initially laid aside that dream for the task at hand.

Okay, Jessi is calming down. It just hit me that I think I saw you are a Christian in your profile, so I think that might be why you thematically included this? Anyhoo, lovely!

Author's Response: I actually had to go back and read this little story so I would be able to know exactly what you were talking about!

I'm so glad that I was able to capture the image of a father and his two sons. I don't have any children and it was really all up to my imagination to get the scene right, so I'm ecstatic that I did.

Harry's thoughts about death seemed so natural to me. I mean, how many times would he look at his life and realize how lucky he is to be alive. And then to decide that he'd risk his life -again- for his family. And I believe Harry would.

Yes, I am a Christian, and I can't exactly remember what I was thinking when I wrote this story, but I imagine that last line was definitely a reference to Christ. ^^

Thank you again! I wasn't expecting you to read this story, so this was a pleasant surprise. :DDD

Magically Yours,


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