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Review:JLHufflepuff says:
I like seeing their reactions to the incident once they are away from each other. Lucius's perspective is very nice, indeed! I don't think of him as ever possessing a chink in that armor of his, but I think you've brought it out realistically. He is, after all, still a teenager with hormones and insecurities. The way he questions Severus is neat, as is Sev's reaction. The Black sisters are characterized well, also. And did I mention that you make him just a little bit dreamy, too??

I love Lily's little flashback to the past that explains why she did what she did, what made her who she is. I also LOVE it as a symbol for Lucius. Maybe?

I'm really curious to find out what happens next, so I'm adding this to my favorites... Also, kind of curious as to whether this story ends canon or not ... Hrmm... Guess I'll just have to wait to find out!!!

Author's Response: I thought it would be interesting to see the story from both sides instead of just one. Both of these characters are full of such personality and beliefs that seeing how both of them transform from the relationship is almost essential for anyone to even understand how it could happen.

I love writing Lucius. He's such a character! And dreamy, apparently. :P

Flashbacks are my best friend. Haha, it was definitely a symbol for Lucius. Very obviously, I hope. I thought that there needed to be an explanation to why Lily helped him. I mean, she's no saint. She had every reason to just leave him there or worse, but that would go against everything she wants to live for.

Hmm, I guess you will have to wait! Yay favorites!

Thank you again for another lovely review!

-Dem-


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