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The thing that strikes me most about this story is Callum to be honest. Hes truly a brilliant character. The only thing i seem to keep noticing is how youve put him in the story sort of like you would with a normal HP character. Like theres no backstory to him. Im sure you have a reason for this, but i was just curious if you ever intended to adding a slight backstory to the other (what i would consider to be the other two main characters.) Callum and Anderson. obviously you wouldnt want to go in depth about it, as it would distract from the main story, but i think maybe just a slight inkling of their past would make them even better as characters :)
to be honest, anderson and callum are quite easily my favourite characters. they seem so much more real. especially callum, who seems to have his own layer of problems.

Author's Response: I considered having more information on callum, but when i tried to put it in it either detracted from the chapter since it didn't flow with the rest of the work or it was unnecessary information. in the end, i think i ust decided to focus on the impact he has on harry. i think that that importance in his life can be more important than his role in the wizarding world.

i could very easily be wrong though.

but i am glad you like him, i wanted to explore a hogwarts student having fried OUTSIDE of the school (given how few students there were i think it's nonsensical to assume everyone's best friend would be from there since there's simply not enough of a selection in people)

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