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Review:Ronsgirl29 says:
Hey, here with review for chaper 2!

I'd say you definitely have plent of mystery still, because I have no idea whats going on! Other than K and D are being sent by some secret organization to help the order. You haven't revealed too much either. If anything, I'd want you to reveal more so I can know what's happening(:

I enjoyed how you had them interact with the members of the order. The test part you threw in was a nice touch because I could see them being apprehensive about trusting strangers, even if they are there to help.

K's whole speech on the london bridge was pretty great, it gives me a good sense of her character.

You have a good base for a mystery going on, and it will be interesting to see how you have this unfold.

-ronsgirl29

Author's Response: Ha! As much as I'd love to tell you more - I can't. That would be giving too much away.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the test. There will be others - the Order isn't willing to trust them just yet.

I worked so hard on that speech. It made me so nervous - I'm not used to writing the inspirational speech into anything.

Thank you, it was a lovely review. Sorry it took so long to respond.


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