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Review:katiefelton says:
First off, Mr. Darcy, I would love to thank you for posting such a wonderful series! I loved reading a New Life and this, A Previous life:) You are a wonderful writer, and I really enjoyed reading through these two stories.

Secondly, I'm so glad that you posted a sequel to A New Life. I felt that it abruptly ended, excluding the alternate ending, and I loved this. I really don't read many Scorpious Rose fics, but you converted me! You captured their characters so well, and I actually enjoyed their story very much.

Ok. Honestly, I was really disapointed with the ending of A Previous Life! I felt like you had so many creative ways to end this, and I felt as if it had a really bland and boring ending:( I really believed that Scorpious and Rose would get together! So here is what I think should have happened:

-Rose would be recovering at the hospital, and Draco would be tending to her. She would begin to see how caring he actually is, and her hatred towards him would begin to melt. She may even ask him, "You really love my mother don't you?"

-She then would have a heart to heart with her mother, and slowly begin to see that her mother has been suffering, and that she has sacficied so much for Rose during her life. Maybe in an epilogue, she would finally be at peace with Hermione and Draco's relationship.

-I want a wedding! Haha it it so cheesy, but they deserve to rightfully be together.

-Rose and Scorpious need to get together. Period. They had such a wonderful relationship throughout this piece, and it is a crime that she ends up with Gabriel. A crime!

So please consider changing the ending to this story. Your readers will be thrilled if you make it more of a happy ending! But if you choose to keep it the same, as a fellow author myself, I whole heartedly respect your decision:)

Again, I enjoyed reading your stories so so so much! You are an extremely talented writer, and I will be reading your other stories! Thank you so much for posting A New Life and A Previous Life!

-katiefelton:)

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