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Review:Inti says:
FIRST FIRST FIRST! (I better be anyway)

Seeing as I've already been over this with you, not entirely sure what else is left!
This is actually one of the single most brilliant ideas seen on HPFF, like, ever. And that it's Lily/James makes it SO MUCH better. Love Sirius the dog, although not sure if you want us all to know that yet :P
Characterisations are spot on, just perfect. James especially as the obnoxious boy who just can't help himself. You can see what he's trying to do, but just takes it way, way too far. Talking about the whole book thing of course.

Umm that's all I've got for the moment, post the next chapter soon please? I just LOVE IT!

Author's Response: YES. YOU GOT THE FIRST REVIEW. HAPPY?

PAH! It's hardly among the single most brilliant ideas on HPFF. And NO! You're not supposed to know that Sirius is a dog, though I think it's pretty obvious :P

Glad you liked the characters and, you know, the story in general. Shall update in about a week or two? I dunno. Maybe sooner, maybe longer. Depends on my mood.

THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEW!


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