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Review:Jellyman says:
This is so delightfully different from your usual - though it still retains the wonderful you-ness. Rose is so dreadfully indesisive and Teddy is just AMAZING AND HE IS MY NEW HUSBAND and it was just wonderful and perfect and I want to marry it, too.

One small inconsistency - one spot you say Rose is 24 and in the last line you write 26. I'm pretty sure the 24 wasn't a flashback either. BUT, speaking of last lines, that one was BRILLIANT. I can't really explain why I loved it so much, but I did and it was ♥

Author's Response: It is and yet I like it better, I think. It's got a bit more substance to it, perhaps, than most of my other one-shots (I think it's of a similar mould to Parachute)

I'm glad you like him. Writing him positively made a bit of a change for me :P I don't know what would possess her to even consider saying no.

You are right and I keep meaning to go and correct it and forgetting/losing it. Will do so now. It's just what happens when you have a 5 month gap between starting and finishing it :P

Really? I hate the last line of this, I must say. It took me multiple tries to get it to that.

I'm very glad you liked it, my love. Shall edit that age thing now.

♥
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