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Review:Dalek194 says:
Nice work :-) You have written Molly's perspective well, and it has a very happy feel to it. There are lots of new characters you've introduced that can make it confusing, and make it drag on a bit, but you've given each of them their own personality really well. Very sweet, I look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon!

A quick note; if there is another chapter, why does it say "Completed" and not "WIP" in the story status?

Author's Response: You are correct, it should say WIP! my mistake. There are four chapters total and the whole story is already written. It will be posted alternately with chapters of my other larger story "Harry Potter and the Heart of the Hero" and will show up as quickly as the validation process allows.
I am glad you like the children. People sometimes complain that there are too many characters, but the whole point is to show the post-war prosperity of the Weasley's.
The rest of the story changes focus, and it is not required that you recall childrens' names, only the impact of their existence.
Hope you enjoy the rest.


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