I'd rather have a cyber chocolate chip muffin, thank you :*
You wont believe what this did to me
I have tears running down my face, the song that used to make me switch mtv whenever it went playing over and over on YouTube, trying not to wake up my friend that's sleeping next to me...
Really? Perfection... it's just a typical YOUR story...I don't know why, but it is. I'd say its the best one yet, that you have outdone yourself though that would be kind-of a lie, partly because I remember I always feel like this after reading your fics, partly because I don't remember the other ones that well, but... it's just perfect. I know I'm rambling (no surprise there), but it's really nice :)
Hm... I have no idea :D
The bond? The way she's more herself with him than with anyone else? The way she's able to talk about "what-if-they-didn't-hate-each-other" (well, at least to me it seems like a give-away, since Im not able to do that with the people I hate (though that's already solved, thanks god) nor have I ever heard or read about anyone that really hated someone with the burning passion Rose thinks she hates Scorpius to be able to do that.) It's all very cute, really. The way she *scrolls back to check* "Doesn't want to see him ruffle his hair" aw :)
The way he doesn't hate the way she looks at him when she thinks he won't notice? The way she doesn't hate the way he walks out of the bathroom in the morning and bumps into her? The way he stops her from finishing the last bit? Her "Such a Malfoy" commentary?
That stuff left me speechless.
Where do you get the ideas?
It's beauty. Pure beauty. Really :)
Of course, there is stuff I don't get.
His "What?" after she tells him she doesn't hate him? They already established (can I use it like that? I mean, is it the right use of the word?)that they both felt the connection, so what's he so surprised about? That's the only minor thing I don't get, though :)
When I read the part where she finally looked at him, I felt like her (or at least what I thought felt like her), my lip bitten, trying not to cry.
I have one more question: How do you know how to start fics without making it sound so...fake? Making it sound right, perfect and natural.
I's sorry for the useless review, but I kinda hope you're used to my babbling :D
P.S I'm sorry, but I can't stop myself-when will there be a new Cry For You chapter? I know I ask all most every time I review, but. :)
Author's Response: Oh, my. The first time I set my eyes on this review I looked at the length and went:
Hahah. Awe, no one has ever said this story was pure beauty! I really didn't think this was all that great, I am not ready for all this worship :P
And the reason he says "what" is because he's shocked at how random it comes out. He never thought about their connection like that. They never made it verbal, you know?
I make it sound natural!? Really!? I don't know how I do that hahah but thank you.
I love your rambling! And I'm sorry about the wait for CFY but I'm in the works with it - expect an update this month!