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Review:Steph says:
I love the story, so much as I can after one chapter that is.
But there is i few things you might want to think about. When you change point of wiew it would be a lot eaiser to understand if you wrote Draco's POV.
And when your coting the song lyrics it's much eaiser to under stand if you cursiv the text.
Otherwise i find the story really good. I can't wait until next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your creative criticism. I think it's important if you see both POVS. So you can understand the past histories that make them so much of who they are. for chapter two I have decided aganist using lyrics but instead giving a companion song I suggest you listen to while reading the chapter. I just couldn't recreate the lyrical magick I had with "our own prison" in this story.
I hope you enjoy chapter two. It's kind of short but it's a transition chapter.
I hope I can look forward to you contiuning to be part of my creative process..
If your bored, check out my other Draco fics..

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