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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
So... hey! This is actually DarkRose from the forums with a review you requested in... April. XD I'm so sorry this took that long for me to get to. That's ridiculous.

But despite that... review time!

Great job! :D I really liked this, actually. I've never imagined a Dom/Scorpius pairing, but this changed my view. You approached it so well! I really liked the descriptions you had throughout the one-shot. They definitely set the scene wonderfully.

The one thing you might change is that a lot of your sentences have the same structure (subject, verb, etc. with some adjectives thrown in) which can get a bit repetitive. But if you change some sentences up a bit with prepositions or something, that might help. :]

Great characterization. You approached Dominque really, really well and formed her character spectacularly. Overall, you did a very good job! :D

Again, I'm so sorry for the inexcusable delay.


Author's Response: Hello there!! Don't worry about the wait, I always take ages to respond to review requests so I can hardly blame you! :P

I'm glad you liked the description. This was a strange writing style, and I thought perhaps the description was a bit over the top - so your advice on changing sentance structure is really useful and I will definately think about that next time I am writing.

Dom/Scorpius is my favourite next gen ship so I'm glad you liked it ;)

Thank you so much for this review - I don't mind the wait, better late than never! Thank you - this is much appreciated!

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