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Review:LovlyRita_Staff says:
I loved this!! Oh Sev and lily. It should have been!! I loved your descriptions, I could definitely close my eyes and feel as though I was there. But, you know, then I had to open them because I had to finish the story. But what ev.

I think the dialogue was believable enough, and I definitely think that Severus would have fought Dumbledore on being needed elsewhere. Lily was his, and he would protect her at all costs. That's the number 1 thing I got from the HP series. Lily should have been his. Instead of James's. Who I hate.

But anyway, I loved how simple this was, and though I don't know what is going on with her illness, I think this story works, and you did a marvelous job, my dear!

Author's Response: Aww LR THANKS!!! Yes I hate James too. Sev and Lily all the way!!! I'm glad you liked it seeing as Sev is your BFF and everything. THANKS SO MUCH!

Oh and I have to add this ;) (ah staff wo!!!) hehehehe

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