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Review:Theophaneia says:
Hello!

Just got to say, I love how Cody and Oliver's relationship is shaping up so far. Their chemistry is undeniable, but the fact that they wouldn't be able to "fraternize" because they're on the same team could definitely be a hindrance. Hope not, though...

I love how you characterize these characters. You make them have depth, which is really important. I can already, definitely, tell that both Oliver and Cody have a past. I'm not quite sure what has happened to Cody (was it just the Quidditch accident, or is it more?) or if it's supposed to still be a mystery, but I love how Oliver shows this side of himself. It makes his character more real and more relatable (I don't even know if that's a word, because the red squiggly line is showing beneath it but it's the best word I can come up with, haha).

Can't wait to see what's in store for Cody, Oliver, and the rest of the team. Hope these "team builder" exercises help push Cody and Oliver together, if you get my drift. ;D

Love the story so far! Great work!

-Theophaneia

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