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Review:moonbaby11 says:
Aw, this was really sweet. :) It made me feel happy, to hear George reminising about Fred. I think you characterized George very well. He's not depressed about Fred being dead, but he's also not completly over it, and still pulling pranks. Most people seem to do one or the other, so I liked what oyu did there.

I just wanted to point out that in the last two paragraphs, you changed you tense. You went from it being past tense, to present tense. Just wanted to point that out so oyu could fix it up! Other than that, great story. :)

Author's Response: Ahhh oh no did I really? Shoot, I hate tenses, I am awful with them to be perfectly honest, so thanks for pointing it out! I am planning on going back through all my one-shots and fixing them up this summer, so that will be something I look into.

I guess I am going in reverse order of you, but, I am so glad you found this sweet and that you liked George! Yay! I am not one for sappy Fred, really I didn't know to write that with out full out crying, which I knew I had to avoid. Thanks so much!
:)BaletGir


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