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Review:karinapotter says:
Oh, dear, that was intense. That was so emotionally draining! Lily, so desperate, and Lorcan, not being able to see how it affected her. I mean, he saw, once she was with the axe! Oh the axe! That was scary, it was almost as if Lily was trying to keep herself from drowning in the fear of death. Lorcan and her are totally different people, I mean, he's embraced it so much-he made COFFINS for himself&Lily after all!-while Lily, she's just trying to see life in everything! AAAH, the descriptions were breathtaking! It was almost as if I was there! You're such a talented writer! :D 10/10

Author's Response: The intensity of the intenseness was pretty intense, I'll admit that. Intense stuff. It was pretty emotionally draining to write, too, seeing as most of it was done in the wee hours of the morning before a particularly important week of exams.

'it was almost as if Lily was trying to keep herself from drowning in the fear of death.'

I'd say that that was exactly what I was trying to convey, so thank you (:

And Lorcan is a bit of a weirdy guy. In a lovely way.

Thanks for the review! I'd give it 10/10. It's made me rather happy (:

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