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Review:DemetersChild says:
Hmm, quite an eventful chapter, this one. Interesting, yes. No doubt about that. No worries. This is still a very interesting and captivating story. There are so many questions left unanswered, how do you stop reading a fic like this?

As for it being still has those hints. Like at the beginning when we find out that the O sent them on separate missions during their MD anniversary. There's so much about the O that no one, not even the characters, know.

I am a little bit confused, though. Because it seems half the time they forget their missions completely once their over, and the other half you mention things that make it seem like they do remember what happens. Like this part:

"It might have been comical if it weren't so serious and yet, she knew that when she told Doyle about this, he'd have everyone in stiches someday as he told the story."

How is Doyle going to be telling everyone about it someday if he won't remember it? Or will he? That's what I'm confused about.

Overall, another good chapter. I look forward to finding out who the Death Eaters are! I've got a suspicion that one is Severus, but then he could have taught the others his spells by now. And I'd really hope for him to still be a good person. Because I'm rather fond of Snape. ^^

I hope these reviews were helpful! Thanks for requesting. :D


Author's Response: To be honest, I've debated whether to answer your question about missions all day and I've finally come to a decision about it. And that is that I might as well tell you that all official missions start with the words "For Your Eyes Only." Her foray into fighting the Death Eaters is actually just her defending herself against attack, so that memory won't be taken away.

As to the identity of the Death Eaters, I shall say nothing of it.

Thank you for all of the lovely reviews! I appreciate your candor and opinions.

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