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Review:Margravine says:
Jack! can't believe I missed this til now, but love, love, love!!

It really was an absolutely hilarious read (although that banner is TERRIFYING). Dom's completely mad but heaps fun to read; you had me at the cabana boy allegory but the whole piece was pure gorgeousness. Also very, very you, from flouncing to "Oh Rude!".

let's see, bits I particularly adored :

brilliant, brilliant opening - Even in sleep muddled state, looks really rather spectacular. High-fived self. Top work Dominique. Decision to leave hair long totally paying off.

elevator scene = made of win as was the brackets. Interesting also to see Harry/Dom dynamics, as it's hinted in MM but not outright shown. It was killingly sidesplitting (although the only cc I can give is that I want more and that Harry doesn't slip into what I will under protest term 'Jack-speak' as easily as the rest)

Actually, on flicking through, FAR too many favourite lines to quote, so just be content with general awe and extreme envy of skillz and the like.

Now get on a MM update.. pretty please with Gemma Arterton on top?

Author's Response: You've hardly missed it all you crazy! It's been up for like two seconds!

OH GOOD! Is the banner really terrifying? Or terrifying how amazingly gorgeous and perfect for Dom that girl is? She is a properly certifiable lunatic, it's what makes her so fun!
You wait Jo, it's totally taking over, one of these days I'm going to click on some completely random story and read flounced. When I see you writing it, then mission is complete.

Can't go wrong with a bit of self adulation. Just so completely sincere you can't help but admire it. Theoretically anyway.

Oh it's all about the brackets. I mean, it's quite lazy writing really, but then so is the rest of it I suppose. I'll just claim unique snowflake stylistic brilliance and flounce onwards.

As for Harry, it's kind of deliberate and kind of just hard to make him fall into it. As for the Harry/Dom dynamics, I think I mentioned that to another reviewer just earlier. I've definitely mentioned it at least once in MM, so kind of had to bring it out. Quite tricky getting the balance right, what with Dom being an absolute nightmare but then kind of charming at the same time.

Skillz you say? Pretty sure yours are the maddest out, but I'll smile and nod along with you!

Oh well how can I possibly refuse that? Tonight alright? As long as you keep hassling me, it's freezing cold and am already about half-way done with it. And have just reached decision to make Louis angst some more, so that should get things going.

Thank you so much for an amazing review, I truly hope you enjoyed it!


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