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Review:Miss Lily Potter says:
Wow. I thought Draco might be the God... But, to be honest, I was hoping he wasn't, because then it would mean (in my head, before I read this, remember) that he would betray them to the Dark Lord and they would all die and junk. But I like that he's a 'good guy', and I really like that Narcissa was put under the Imperius Curse. Lucius is a Death Eater, after all, he wouldn't have any qualms about hurting/controlling someone to get what he wanted, especially since he's a Malfoy. Malfoys always get what they want, of course. (:

Okay, so I like that Malfoy is a good guy. But he wouldn't know that he was involved unless he was trying to read Harry's/Lily's future, right? Or would he see it because it was his future, as well? I'm sorry, that just confused me...

I like the charm. (: It's sadistic, evil, and it shows that Lucius really has no love for his son at all, whereas Narcissa, the better person, has all the love in the world for Draco, and he her. (: It's really sweet (on Narcissa's side), and I like it. A lot.

Wow. I'm sorry this review is so much shorter than the others, I just had a lot less to say, I suppose. (:

Feel free to request for chapter five, I like this story. :D
-Jasmine

Author's Response: I've always had a soft spot for Draco and I just couldn't resist writing a fanfic where he was clearly a good guy instead of just kind of being one like in the books haha. I figured the most believable way to pull that off was to give him some sort of connection to the good side and Narcissa seemed the best way to do that. And yes the reason that he had the vision of the future was because it also involved him and was connected to his own future. Their decision to rescue him directly involves him and so he had a vision of the outcome of that decision. I'm happy you like this story I've been working on it for some time now and it's good to see it finally coming together.

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