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Review:TallestTower says:
It's Broomsticks here with your review again! :) Sorry for the massive gap between reviews. I've been really slow at reviewing this week, I guess I'm just tired. Hope it's okay.

I really enjoyed this chapter. I love the small details and descriptions you put into each chapter. I like K's tapping, and I really liked the introduction to this chapter it was very vivid.

I can't help but 'Aww' over K and D at the ministry... they are so perfect for each other! :D I have really fallen in love with these two OC's doing these reviews and D is just the best - haha, I love him.

I love their acting and coded language, and the little details you put into this story really make it great and realistic.

I want to know more about this memory wiping business! I get more intrigued with each chapter. I wonder why K and D can only remember their meeting? And who erases their memories?

The doubt of the trio was interesting, and added even more mystery to the plot I think. I'm also interested to see how you develop the war and activities with Voldemort seeing as this is AU after HBP.

And now... I'm really worried about D! I mentioned that he's my favourite character. Where is he? What's going on? I'm left with so many questions.

In answer to your doubts as to whether this story is still interesting and retains mystery - I'm definately mystified and interested! The story is very gripping and the writing flows well. The ending is absolutely brilliant and makes me want to read on! (Which I will do as soon as I can!)

Hope this review was useful, thanks for requesting. Keep writing! :)

~ Broomsticks/TallestTower

Author's Response: It's no problem! I wasn't really even expecting another review! I was incredibly happy to see this one!

I'm so glad you liked her tapping. It's one of the traits that I've been trying to imbue her with. And I'm glad you liked her job.

As for the whole memory-removal business, I can only say, "Mwhahaha," and leave it at that.

I promise there will be more development in the Trio and in the post HBP war activities. I just have to get to it. I have so much story exploding in my head right now. This is the first fan-fiction I've ever had an official plan with. It's really hard not to just make it all into one enormous chapter.

This review was very useful. Thank you very much for writing it :)



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