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Review:soliloquy says:
Beautiful. That's all I can describe this chapter as. Beautiful. Detailed. Intelligent. Well-thought out. Wonderfully written.

How do you develop such sentence structures? Every line, every bit of dialogue not only has an incredible amount of wit -- it has wonderful details. You describe the cobblestones so wonderfully that I can literally see it in my head. Sirius is also well-developed -- more developed, I think, than most Sirius-oriented stories (and this is only the second chapter!).

I'm obsessed with this story. Obsessed with the way you tell it. Obsessed with the plot. And the characters.

You can feel Sirius' confusing. His frustration. The realization. The sudden knock in the gut when they tell him that he's dead. That they're ALL dead.

What is Epiphany? What is this land that Sirius is in? Do they study Epiphany in the Department of Secrets?

I'm brimming with questions. It was a long wait, I admit, but it was worth the wait. Thank you for writing this wonderful chapter.



Author's Response: Ah, you flatter me with adjectives! :P But, really, thank you a tremendous amount for your comments - I really do smile like an idiot every time I read such amazing reviews!

YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY IN SAYING SO. Sirius's characterization was my top concern with this chapter (I asked my beta if I ruined him completely, that's how worried I was) and the fact that his development is still alright in this chapter is just such a relief!

Writing this second chapter was actually ridiculously daunting, so I really can't thank you enough for everything you're saying! I sound so repetitive, but it's true!

Epiphany is much more than a place you go after death. That's all I'll say, but it'll all (hopefully) unfold within later chapters! And as for the Department studying it, no one except the Epiphanites really know about Epiphany, so it's even bigger of a mystery than you first thought!

Thank you so much for your incredible review, and I promise I'll be quicker with the updates!

♥,
Zinny


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