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Review:potterwriter340237 says:
This is a beautiful story, you have taken such a mysterious journey of life and death and turned it into your own adventure. I love how this is going so far and I really hope your next update doesn't take as long because this is a very refreshing story. I got tingles when he was witnessing his own death, the part with Harry. It was so heat wrenchingly sad..but in a good way haha. I can't even put into words how much I love this story and how intrigued I am by it. Oh also! I am hoping (slash assuming) that he meets up with James and Lily and Remus, it would just be so wonderful but oh god I am already preparing to cry haha, your writing is just so poetic and lovely, I know it will be an emotional ride :)
11/10
-Miranda

Author's Response: I'm so, so thrilled you like this! I agree, the update took FAR too long and I'll do my best to have updates be much closer together! :) Thank you again for sticking with me through that enormous chunk of time!

I was absolutely stumped on how to approach the Sirius watching his own death scene, actually - it's such an emotional moment for him, when it finally clicks as to what he's actually seeing, and the last thing I wanted to do was over-write it and make it less powerful. I tried to keep it rather simple and to the point, but with a kick, so hopefully I conveyed that!

I'm so glad that you're loving this! As for your hope/assumption I won't give it away, there may be some names you recognize in future chapters! Also, there's a lot more to Epiphany than I let on in this chapter - that really comes into play later on!

Thank you so very much for your amazing compliments and comments, I can't tell you how much I appreciate it! :)

-Zinny


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