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Review:Abhorsen says:
I liked that. The echo of Dumbledore's words to Harry during that dream in DH is really nice and you should be proud of it. It makes you think that what she experienced was actually real and the phoenix feather was a nice touch.

I like McGonnagall's stern kindness here too; it's very in character for her to be brusque and concerned at the same time.

9/10

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you very much for the nice review here. I will admit that this is my favourite of all my pieces that I've written.

I'm so glad you liked this and that you caught the echo of DD's words in what Luna said. It was very deliberate and I'm glad people are catching it. I really wanted to have a dream/not dream dichotomy and I think I captured that.

Characterisation is so important to me and it makes me so happy to know that I got it right.



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