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Review:redherring says:
I LOVED this! It's such a brilliant idea and you pulled it off really well. The whole thing was so gothic and sinister, and both of the characters were so interesting - Lorcan saw nothing strange or morbid about any of it because it's just a way of life for him, and so he was pretty calm the whole way through, and then Lily started off all chirpy and cheerful and then by the end was a bit mad and coffin-smashing. Brilliant!

Your description was lovely, as well, and the first and last lines were really amazing. The first completely grabbed me and made me want to read on, and the last was just so chilling! Very creepy. The title was really great, as well - also very attention grabbing.

Fantastic stuff. I really loved it :) (even if I am a bit spooked now :D)

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, Lorcan is one cool guy in this. Completely oblivious to why Lily might be scared when he builds her a coffin. I was telling my mum about the basic plot and she was like 'what? If someone made me a coffin I'd run away, very very fast!' so I wasn't sure whether this was believable or not, but I'm pleased to hear that the characters turned out alright (:

Oh, and the last few lines were actually the first things I wrote. I struggled with the beginning for ages - the final version was my fifth draft of the opening, phew! As for the title, well, that's a really good song, I'd recommend that you listen to it if you haven't already (:

Thanks muchly for the review! :)


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