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Review:Peaky says:
Hey there!

Peaky from the forums here, just stopping by to offer my thoughts/advice/review as you requested. :) I’m sorry this is slightly delayed, my internet decided to go over its limit and it decided to get a virus/crash. Anyways, onwards!

So, after reading the whole story I can honestly say that the flow and characterisation is pretty good, you’ve actually got me hooked on this little one-shot. Although I haven’t read All is NOT fair in Love and War, I think that this little story stands well on its own. I think I read it ages ago actually, it’s a little fuzzy round the edges but its slowly coming back or I’m just getting confused with a different one…not sure. The Gypsy reference got me slightly confused but I went back and re-read everything a few times (which I don’t mind doing,) and I understood it so that’s all G. I think the concept fits in well, its different and new. :) So instant win in my books.

As for Sirius and Saleena, their relationship screams chemistry in your face. The way you’ve written is breathtaking, the parallels between their two different worlds does give the reader a wider perspective… I think one of the other reviewers mentioned it and you stayed in canon really well for Sirius minus the fact you’ve never really written about him for the Marauders Era.

I couldn’t pick up any grammatical/spelling errors, so its all well and good.

I’ll be adding this one to my favourites list as for skipping on over to All is NOT fair in Love and War.

Well written and an amazing piece of work. :)

Signing out,
Peaks

Author's Response: I've got you hooked? Lol, that's awesome!! :)
Thank you so much for the compliments on Sirius and Saleena's relationship. I am so glad you liked it! And if you want to, I think it would be totally awesome if you could check out my novel sometime too!! Thanks so much for the incredible review!! =)

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