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Review:Peaky says:
Hey there!

Peaky from the forums here, just stopping by to offer my thoughts/advice/review as you requested. :) Iím sorry this is slightly delayed, my internet decided to go over its limit and it decided to get a virus/crash. Anyways, onwards!

So, after reading the whole story I can honestly say that the flow and characterisation is pretty good, youíve actually got me hooked on this little one-shot. Although I havenít read All is NOT fair in Love and War, I think that this little story stands well on its own. I think I read it ages ago actually, itís a little fuzzy round the edges but its slowly coming back or Iím just getting confused with a different oneÖnot sure. The Gypsy reference got me slightly confused but I went back and re-read everything a few times (which I donít mind doing,) and I understood it so thatís all G. I think the concept fits in well, its different and new. :) So instant win in my books.

As for Sirius and Saleena, their relationship screams chemistry in your face. The way youíve written is breathtaking, the parallels between their two different worlds does give the reader a wider perspectiveÖ I think one of the other reviewers mentioned it and you stayed in canon really well for Sirius minus the fact youíve never really written about him for the Marauders Era.

I couldnít pick up any grammatical/spelling errors, so its all well and good.

Iíll be adding this one to my favourites list as for skipping on over to All is NOT fair in Love and War.

Well written and an amazing piece of work. :)

Signing out,

Author's Response: I've got you hooked? Lol, that's awesome!! :)
Thank you so much for the compliments on Sirius and Saleena's relationship. I am so glad you liked it! And if you want to, I think it would be totally awesome if you could check out my novel sometime too!! Thanks so much for the incredible review!! =)

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