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Review:ItsUnconditional says:
I feel so bad for poor Louis. He just needs to get the surgery over and done with so that he can stop worrying and be his old happy self again. Steph is doing a good job at being there for him too. I would've done the same thing that she had done if I had found out that my boyfriend hadn't asked me to go to the hospital with him. She quite clearly doesn't want to lose him which is sweet :)

You make all the character's seem so believable that I wouldn't be shocked if this entire chapter was based on something real. It's so emotional and realistic and you just can't help but love it.

I look reading the next chapter as i'm sure it'll be just as amazing as the rest of them :D
Dee, x

Author's Response: Yes Louis is going through a lot lately. the surgery might be in the next chapter? I think...yeah it's gonna be in the next chapter. Steph is a great girlfriend and very supportive of him. I find myself putting bits of myself in my characters. So I'm a lot like Stephanie actually. I keep thinking, "Well what would I do? or what seems realistic?" I definitely would be hurt if my boyfriend wouldn't ask me to go to the hospital with him, especially if he really loved me etc.

I'm glad my characters are believable. I've tried to make them so. Course, with years of writing experience, that helps too...oh wow you're making my blush Dee! You're so sweet!

I am already starting the next chapter! thanks for reviewing! :)

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