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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
SAMI! I absolutely loved how you've set things rolling in action in this chapter. It made it seem more organised and real, instead of just blindly rushing into action which is not how it seemed at all in DH when they were all preparing for battle. It may have been spur of the moment, but it was anything but unplanned as the Order has been preparing for this moment during the past couple years as everything spiraled steadily downward. And furthermore, I like that you are taking time to get to the fighting by putting in all the steps of what happened before the battle began. It was well written and I'm looking forward to reading what else you write for this story; feel free to come back after you've posted the next couple of chapters and I'll gladly review them for you! 10/10

Author's Response: LESLIE, I love you so much. :D In my original outline, none of this calm pre-battle stuff was really going to appear. But I should have known that would never be the case, because I don't ever use outlines. The story just took control of itself, and all of a suddenly there was an actual lead-up and steps and Order planning.

In other words, this is going to be a few chapters longer than I intended. :P

Muchas gracias, a billion times over! -hug-

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