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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hey Sami, back to review as requested. This story is coming along quite nicely and you're doing a lovely job sticking with canon as it seems to be running parallel right along with the events leading up to the final battle in DH. It's nice reading from a minor character's perspective as to how they got to Hogwarts and their experiences in the whole big dueling battle between Good vs. Evil.

Characterisation: Again, I applaud you on your ability to write Fleur and make her seem as real as if she were to came out of this computer screen and tell us her story herself. As for the other characters in this chapter, like Ginny I thought you really captured her stubbornness and tough exterior that she keeps on the service. She is definitely more like Fred and George when it comes to following rules, meaning she prefers to break them more often than following them. And I like how Molly is still very much a mum as she is a member of the Order, too, meaning she is still going off on the twins when they cause the loud noise and rattling of glasses on the counter. She has a temper that is hard to settle, even in dire situations like the one leading up to the final battle in DH.

Plot: As I already said, I like how you're keeping to canon by including those essential elements about how to get into Hogwarts from the Hog's Head (as that played a key role in DH) and the anticipation in the air leading up to the final show down between Voldemort + Death Eaters and the Wizarding World. Over all, great writing and keep it up! 10/10

Author's Response: I love writing different perspectives of the battle; I wrote one from Ginny's PoV for school once! It's fun, but it can be extremely difficult trying to stick to the canon timeline :P

Thank you for pointing out the Molly/Fred/George/Ginny thing! I wanted to keep them acting like themselves, even though there's a battle just around the corner. I especially wanted to give poor Fred some last moments of screentime before he's cut.

Thank you, darling! And wow, you got to this fast! On to respond to the next one!

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