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Review:Slytherin_Ravenclaw_chick says:
Sorry, I have been a bit sick, but here is my review:

Excellent plot. It is very intriguing and pulls the reader right in. you didn't catch a plot bunny, you caught a lot godzilla.

Grammar and spelling was very good. Though, in between dialogue you should space it out a bit more. Sample:

"Hey" she said.

"Hello" I answered.

See, it just looks better to the readers.

The flow was good s well. The dialog matched and made sense. In all, it was very good and I personally liked it. Good job, 9/10.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review I'm glad you enjoyed it. And as for the spacing I have had the same thing mentioned in other reviews so my future chapters have been spaced properly and I will be fixing the already existing chapters as soon as possible. Thanks again.

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