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Review:Abhorsen says:
Review Challenge #1:

You did beautifully with the chronology of the piece. I was a bit confused at first, but then I figured it out and thought it was cool. I hope that was your intention. If not, it was still a good job.

I think you did give Luna a fitting death; she would have wanted something that happened because of her work with magical creatures, I think. And it was very in character to have her watching the falling stars. Beautiful.

9/10

Author's Response: It was my intention and I'm extremely pleased that you liked it! It's been a little bit of a sticking point for readers, but the fact that at least some people out there liked it has been a very supportive thing to hear.

Luna's a bit of a tricky one, but I definitely couldn't pass up the opportunity to write her death. I wanted to do something a little different and unusual for it, because that's the sort of person Luna was. To have her die in a very mundane way just wasn't a possibility for me. It was a little AU in that she died relatively young, but it was an interesting piece to write.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review - I hope you succeed in your challenge! ♥


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