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Review:confusedlover says:
very lovely.

AHHH! i wanted to know the last prophecy before i got to the end of this!! oh well, i guess i'll just have to figure it out soon enough. i thought this was another amazing chapter. not a whole lot happened but plenty to keep me interested and hopeful for more throughout the entire thing. i liked when Sirius and Remus showed up. they basically took up the entire chapter, yeah, but i thought that was really neat. of course they knew of Lily's existence originally but it made sense for them not to know anything more, especially with Dumbledore being Dumbledore.

again, my interest held up throughout the entire thing. i thought, even though this chapter was significantly shorter than the first one, it held plenty of substance to make me continue to want more and more. this chapter was very well done. of course i would have liked to uncover some more but that will come when it needs to. you are still setting up this story for your readers and so it makes sense that you only give bits and pieces at a time.

overall, i thought this was another great chapter. i loved the characters and their interactions in this as well. i don't think i mentioned that before. but even if they were minimal due to this chapter's rather short length, i do think your interactions between your characters showed promising effect for future chapters. just another little thing i picked up on. well, i only read two chapters at a time so if you like my reviews, feel free to request again for whatever you have next to be read, as long as it's not more than two chapters at a time. i hope to read some more from you! also, you can request another story of yours if you don't want me to continue with this one. whatever, it doesn't matter!

thank you for the new and exciting request and i hope you have a very nice day!!

Author's Response: Thank you again for another great review I'll be sure to re-request the next chapters from you. So glad you enjoyed the story thus far. :)

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