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Review:confusedlover says:
very lovely.

wow. i had no idea what this story was going to be about but even as AU as this is, i am sincerely glad that you posted a request for me. i have heard of several stories where Harry has a twin sister or brother but i have never read one up until now. it's actually kind of exciting! i enjoy it when i get to take a look at something i have never experienced and this is no exception. i am a fresh reviewer with this plot and scenario. i have a feeling that's a good thing!

it's really difficult to review a first chapter of a story. i do it a lot, yes, but i can't say that i can offer a lot to begin with, if you know what i mean. i think with what you have here, there is plenty of plot and information to make readers want to read more. i know i definitely can't wait until i get to check out the next chapter, so i don't think you have to worry too much about that. but that is just me. every reader has their turnoffs and preferences and i'm not going to lie and tell you that AU stories are a favorite of mine but i think you'll have a great audience with this story if you continue you writing it as well as this and advertise it the right way. i truly believe that.

overall, i thought this was a very well-written chapter. i would comment more but i can't really think of much more to say this early on. your pace was very well presented in this. you didn't really rush at any points or anything. that is good because you didn't drag either which is almost worse in my opinion. i'm very excited to take a look at the second chapter and do wish to tell you that i am very impressed with what this chapter has presented us all with so far.

onto the second chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for such a kind review I'm so glad that you enjoyed it and you got to read something that you've never tried before.

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