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Review:Whisperer says:
oh wow! i really like this story. for starters, i think i am for oliver/hermione. but then draco's acting all sincere and stuff. and deep down i know she won't end up with either one, because she will end up with ron, because it is "right" or "correct" by society's standards.

something that i really liked is oliver's characterization in the beginning of this chapter. hermione (in her mind) wants to "wipe that stupid grin off of his ugly face". As we all know, Oliver is gorgeous, right. But saying that makes hermione's anger more believable, and even Oliver's character more believable. Because he isn't a saint, he is after all still a somewhat immature young adult (is he 23?...). So yes, overall, the beginning chapters were very realistically portrayed, but then this chapter got somewhat cliched with the constant bump-ins to Oliver, Draco, and McLaggen...

But, please keep on writing! :) And thanks you :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the long review, I've never had one better!! Thanks for all the comments and pointing out the cliches ... they were intentional, I assure you! Review more please, I enjoy people being honest with me. :D x

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