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Review:dracos_babe says:
Another good chapter. You wanted me to tell you if it was still mysterious or if you're giving to much away and as far as I'm concerned I don't think you're giving to much away at all, but it also depends on how mysterious you want this story to stay. However, from what I've read you haven't really given away anything other than the fact that K and D are spies for an American Organization that seems to be the wizarding equivalent of the CIA, we don't even know their real names, but of course neither do they. I think that you have sufficiently kept mystery in your story up to this point. However, I also think that that can only take you so far. Eventually you will have to start revealing things and the key to keeping the story the proper amount of mysterious without losing the readers' attentions is to reveal them at the correct moments and not all at once. I can't really tell where you're planning on going with the plot of this story and there doesn't seem to be much action yet and mystery can only keep your story interesting for so long so I think that you should start to get more into the plot and the action. But that being said, I don't see any reason why you have to reveal K and D's real names or any information about the Organization at any point in the story and then you can keep the mystery all the way until the end (unless of course your plan for this story somehow requires their identities to be revealed in which case disregard my suggestion to maintain the mystery haha).

Author's Response: Thank you for clarifying that. I'm really glad that you could explain it in such detail. I just needed to know that someone else was satisfied that the story was set up in order to continue on to the plot and the action of the story. I'm glad that it's still mysterious. And I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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